How many plastic surgery procedures has heidi montag had

How many plastic surgery procedures has heidi montag had

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Despite being only 23 years young, Heidi Montag had at least 3 procedures Apr 07 and 10 procedures Nov 09.

What plastic surgery procedures has Heidi Montag had?

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I read she had a nose job revision, chin reduction, mini brow lift, Botox in her forehead and frown area, fat injections in her cheeks, nasolabial folds and lips, neck liposuction, ear pinning, liposuction on her waist, hips, inner and oute…

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Q: This is my homework for English class. (I’m not a native speaker) It’s the first article I’ve ever written and I want to become a journalist so it will really help me if you correct my mistakes or just say what you think. Did it have any effect on you? I will not say the title tough I like it 😀 because (this is weird I know) my classmates may find it on google and copy it.————————-What can make a beautiful 23-year-old girl decide to go under the knife and have 10 plastic procedures in a day? Heidi Montag was first known for taking part in the reality show The Hills. As her 15 minutes of fame were over she decided to attract people’s attention by having as many surgeries as she can. We all know that now many women like Heidi want to have parts of their bodies corrected. They are ready to do everything it takes to reach their goal but is it worth it? Why would people want to change the way they look, the way God made them? It’s always connected with complexes or in Montag’s case – insecurity and Hollywood pressure. It only proves that you can’t deal with difficulties and you’re weak. People can’t accept their age, they want to look younger and at the end it makes them look fake rather than beautiful.I can only agree with cosmetic surgeries when you want to hide a scar or other defects, which may bring back many bad memories.It seems to me that there are still quite many people who will never think of having any procedures no matter how many “perfect” people they see on magazines’ covers. These are the ones who want to be natural and real, they want to be loved for who they are. I hope you’re one of these people and if you’re not, I hope you find the strength to change this. Don’t forget – when you’re fake inside, within you, there isn’t a procedure that will make you look really beautiful.

A: Here we go:What can make a beautiful 23-year-old girl decide to go under the knife and have (ten) [Associated Press style is spell out one through 10 and use numerals in most other cases; check the AP Stylebook] plastic [surgery] procedures in a day? Heidi Montag was first known for taking part in the reality show The Hills. As her 15 minutes of fame were over[,] she decided to attract people’s attention by having as many surgeries as she can [could]. We all know that now [Lose the “we all know” unless you know if for sure; start with “Many women…”] many women like Heidi want to have parts of their bodies corrected [That’s subjective; “corrected” means there is something wrong, but you said Heidi was beautiful; maybe you could put it in quotes]. They are ready to do everything it takes to reach their goal [-] but is it worth it? Why would people want to change the way they look, the way God made them? It’s always connected with complexes [“always”? How do prove/support that?] or in Montag’s case[, instead of the dash] – insecurity and Hollywood pressure. It only proves that you can’t deal with difficulties and you’re weak. [You didn’t say, but is this supposed to be an “op-ed piece”? Otherwise, it’s way too subjective. It lacks facts.] People can’t accept their age, they want to look younger and at the end it makes them look fake rather than beautiful.I can only agree with cosmetic surgeries when you want to hide a scar or other defects, which may bring back many bad memories.It seems to me that there are still quite many people who will never think of having any procedures no matter how many “perfect” [good use of those quotes] people they see on magazines’ covers. These are the ones who want to be natural and real, they want to be loved for who they are. I hope you’re one of these people and if you’re not, I hope you find the strength to change this. Don’t forget – when you’re fake inside, within you, there isn’t a procedure that will make you look really beautiful.Okay, I’m going for this being an op-ed piece, so I like it. Disregard my “subjective” comments, go with my grammatical ones, and call it a day. However, did this girl really have 15 procedures in one day?! I would put a little bit more information about that in there … maybe even show before and after pictures with the article.

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Q: This is my homework for English class. (I’m not a native speaker) It’s the first article I’ve ever written and I want to become a journalist so it will really help me if you correct my mistakes or just say what you think. Did it have any effect on you? I will not say the title tough I like it 😀 because (this is weird I know) my classmates may find it on google and copy it.————————-What can make a beautiful 23-year-old girl decide to go under the knife and have 10 plastic procedures in a day? Heidi Montag was first known for taking part in the reality show The Hills. As her 15 minutes of fame were over she decided to attract people’s attention by having as many surgeries as she can. We all know that now many women like Heidi want to have parts of their bodies corrected. They are ready to do everything it takes to reach their goal but is it worth it? Why would people want to change the way they look, the way God made them? It’s always connected with complexes or in Montag’s case – insecurity and Hollywood pressure. It only proves that you can’t deal with difficulties and you’re weak. People can’t accept their age, they want to look younger and at the end it makes them look fake rather than beautiful.I can only agree with cosmetic surgeries when you want to hide a scar or other defects, which may bring back many bad memories.It seems to me that there are still quite many people who will never think of having any procedures no matter how many “perfect” people they see on magazines’ covers. These are the ones who want to be natural and real, they want to be loved for who they are. I hope you’re one of these people and if you’re not, I hope you find the strength to change this. Don’t forget – when you’re fake inside, within you, there isn’t a procedure that will make you look really beautiful.

A: That’s good. I’d never guess you weren’t a native English speaker. You could use a little help with commas, but it’s still good.